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Did I, somehow, displace the house?
Did I, somehow, displace the house?Did I subvocalize some arcane apprentice spell
erasing all but this field of dust, this forest of debris
with hypnagogic sorcery
One reads so indiscriminately in dreams.
I turned a page and stepped inside
a shed, two-holer, kennel, midden.
Did I, somehow, displace the house?
On the way to re-create the primal chaos
what cryptic grammar did I use?
While I fantasized an ordered life
did I subvocalize some arcane apprentice spell?
I wanted to draw the perfect angles of diamond window panes
and smooth the cherry curves of the new sleigh bed,
but mishandled the wand or stylus,
erasing all but this field of dust, this forest of debris.
Did I replace my blue porch home
with trash heaped on molding dishes,
or did it gallop on the wind pure as a hero
with hypnagogic sorcery?
By Deb
This week’s promptFor the cascade poem, a poet takes each line from the first stanza of a poem and makes those the final lines of each stanza afterward. Beyond that, there are no additional rules for rhyming, meter, etc.
This week I’m going to borrow a writing exercise from my creative non-fiction teacher. I think it will lend itself to my purposes (drill for old material in a new way) quite well. After all, what doesn’t serve poetry?
Set yourself down at a quiet writing table with blank paper and a couple of pens or pencils. Set a timer for 30 minutes and draw your home. I don’t mean design your home, or become a drafts person and render it accurately, but I do mean try to identify all the rooms in your house in a graphic manner. On paper: walls, stairs, sinks, doors, furniture. No one is going to see this drawing but you, so don’t worry about how well you craft it. Just draw your home for 30 minutes.
Now (as in immediately after you have finished your drawing) free-write for 20-30 minutes about something this drawing brought to your attention. It may or may not have anything to do with your house. Just go with whatever comes to mind and write down at least a page of that stream of consciousness flow.
Next step (which doesn’t have to immediately follow): write yourself a poem using something from your free-write.
